Break From The Mould
 

Hurting the dry wall
with your anger and your fears
Bones breaking
under pressure from your loved ones tears
Shaking the fabric
of your relationship with God
Covering your errors
with the comfort of her heart

CHORUS
Break from the mould (x6)

Religion is a plotline
and we've fell into the story
behind cigarettes
looking for some morning glory
(oh yeah)
Retribution is my Jesus
and revenge is in my gun
My reflection is all blank now
and my shadows eaten by the sun

I like the last verse the best. Not the best i've seen you do though. Its fine the way it is, so I really have nothing to add.

Hooray for pointless critiqueing!