Does this work? (Break The Silence) (guitarist, track, songs, guitar)

[DontRunMeOver]

So, again I'm going to try to let you hear some of my songs for critical purposes.





This one was recorded last month and our guitarist hoarded the recordings, because he wasn't happy with the sounds but now I've pried them from his greedy fingers. Its still unmixed and incomplete as there are a few vocal overlays and harmonies to be added and the guitar is a bit tinny on various bits, but I think you can get the idea (the mid-section has one track and the high-pitched bit is going to be removed as its horrible and will be replaced with counterpointed vocal lines of some kind, to give a more turbulent feel before resolving back into the last bridge vocals...)

Anyway, any thoughts or suggestions?


p.s. I hope I haven't given you a link for porn instead... if I have then let me know and I'll remove it!!

EDIT: ^ I think I did! I'll put the correct link up in a minute, hopefully.