When the Sun Sets in the East (quote, song, Horn)

takes2tokill · 07-16-2006, 10:30 PM

[ ] = Scream

When the Sun Sets in the East

Verse
Colors of this morning are the first light on the inside of my eyes
Open eyes, seeing blood trails with no sense of direction, staining the black,
But as I turned I saw you weren’t next to me in this new morning’s sun.
In this light, separation anxiety is already setting in…

Chorus
[It doesn’t matter where I am, what I’m doing,
or how much fun I’m having] I still miss you. [I miss you]
We can watch the sunsets together again,
If you give me all that’s lost inside your heart.
I miss you…

Verse
The sunsets of light orange and yellow pink brought happiness to me,
The same happiness that you brought to me.
Now that you’re gone you’re included in every one of my thoughts.
I wish we could watch one more sunset together, one more time.
just one more time

(Chorus)

Verse
Though things go backwards time moves forward.
If the sun set in the morning wouldn’t it be night?
I’ll longingly sit awake and wait.
It’s dark now, and the image of your face fades from my mind.
I miss you…

(Chorus)

Verse
When we’re separated for that period of time,
And when all sunsets will set in the east,
Things that go backwards but forward in time
Bring us together again,
and all will be good.

Black out the sun.
No moment lasts forever.

takes2tokill · 07-23-2006, 11:16 PM

soo...
no1's going 2 crit this?

sleepy jack · 07-23-2006, 11:18 PM

Just to tell you, people typically dont crit pieces by someone who doesn't crit anyone elses.

I'm in a good mood, but i'm going to bed soon, so i'll crit it tomorrow.

takes2tokill · 07-23-2006, 11:22 PM

o dude ur right im so srry, im on a bunch of differnt forums at once... and it just kinda slips my mind.. ....

... ya...

Raine · 07-23-2006, 11:48 PM

i can't imagine anyone singing this but. . .
it sounds like you wrote this for chris cornell. He's the only guy I can think of that could possibly pull something like this off. Either that or Brandon Boyd. But your best bet is Chris

sleepy jack · 07-23-2006, 11:50 PM

Okay, after reading this through a couple times..heres my thought.

Do you enjoy ripping off Hawthorne Heights?

In other words, its one big cliche.

Raine · 07-23-2006, 11:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowquill

Okay, after reading this through a couple times..heres my thought.

Do you enjoy ripping off Hawthorne Heights?

In other words, its one big cliche.

or maybe matchbook romance. Their song transit comes to mind.
But i can't imagine anybody except chris cornell singing this.

07-16-2006, 10:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
takes2tokill Groupie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: hell on earth Posts: 7	When the Sun Sets in the East [ ] = Scream When the Sun Sets in the East Verse Colors of this morning are the first light on the inside of my eyes Open eyes, seeing blood trails with no sense of direction, staining the black, But as I turned I saw you weren’t next to me in this new morning’s sun. In this light, separation anxiety is already setting in… Chorus [It doesn’t matter where I am, what I’m doing, or how much fun I’m having] I still miss you. [I miss you] We can watch the sunsets together again, If you give me all that’s lost inside your heart. I miss you… Verse The sunsets of light orange and yellow pink brought happiness to me, The same happiness that you brought to me. Now that you’re gone you’re included in every one of my thoughts. I wish we could watch one more sunset together, one more time. just one more time (Chorus) Verse Though things go backwards time moves forward. If the sun set in the morning wouldn’t it be night? I’ll longingly sit awake and wait. It’s dark now, and the image of your face fades from my mind. I miss you… (Chorus) Verse When we’re separated for that period of time, And when all sunsets will set in the east, Things that go backwards but forward in time Bring us together again, and all will be good. Black out the sun. No moment lasts forever.

07-23-2006, 11:48 PM	#5 (permalink)
Raine Full-Time Hellion Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: PA Posts: 1,531	i can't imagine anyone singing this but. . . it sounds like you wrote this for chris cornell. He's the only guy I can think of that could possibly pull something like this off. Either that or Brandon Boyd. But your best bet is Chris __________________ A pair of powerful spectacles has sometimes sufficed to cure a person in love. ~ Friedrich Nietzsche

07-23-2006, 11:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
takes2tokill Groupie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: hell on earth Posts: 7	soo... no1's going 2 crit this?

07-23-2006, 11:22 PM	#4 (permalink)
takes2tokill Groupie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: hell on earth Posts: 7	o dude ur right im so srry, im on a bunch of differnt forums at once... and it just kinda slips my mind.. .... ... ya...