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08-26-2006, 05:41 PM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,418
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Lonely/Comfy/Dying/Smiling
I was prepared to close the curtain
I saw their lives crashing above me Nothing could change, of that I was certain But I was wrong and now I'm feeling so free Live out your life As if you will die tonight The harder you try The more you fall And I'm not alone anymore I've got everyone around me Not the same as before But happiness don't come for free I'm not alone anymore I've got the ones I love right here The world's still full of hate, sure But now there's less too fear Cos I'm not alone anymore I was young and things were perfect Then my life was swept under my feet Wondering what I did too deserve it Someone so strong becomes so weak Live out your life As if you will die tonight The harder you try The more you fall Don't wanna be alone anymore I want people around me My feet stay stuck to the floor Looking for love in everyone I see Don't wanna be alone anymore I want people around me My feet stay stuck to the floor Looking for love in everyone I see Don't wanna be alone anymore |
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08-26-2006, 05:43 PM
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isfckingdead
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 18,967
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I think you should change the last line, I mean its good. But it doesn't really feel like it ends it, if you get my meaning. Its just kind of an average ending. Thats kind of the only thing I havee to add. I liked it.
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