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Old 09-08-2006, 02:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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Read between the lines
I won't help you all the time
I'm feeling a certain way
I'm feeling it every day
Unfortunately it's all for you

Be my crashmat

Read the body language
How can't you understand this
Or maybe you can but won't act upon it
But I like to think that you want it
And I'm fooling myself over you

Be my crashmat

Look underneath the words
I know my thoughts aren't all that blurred
Tried so hard to be straight forward
And yes, it makes me feel so awkward
I'm in the road asleep

Be my crashmat
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Old 09-08-2006, 03:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, but it kind of lacks something. Its sort of, boring? Not your best.
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Old 09-08-2006, 03:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah I know... it was boring to create to be honest... I've just started paying attention to the song writing forum again so I thought I'd limber up again.
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