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Old 09-28-2006, 10:38 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Grey Septembers (work in progress)

We are 2 young people looking for an excuse to rebel
Of course we're gonna be told that it's each other that's giving us hell
But we know differently
in my mind you complete me
You are the questions to my answers
and the cure for all my cancers
Drizzly rain on the conservatory roof
We warm each other and here's our proof
Grey Septembers to grey septembers
Destroying each others youth
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Old 09-28-2006, 12:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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That was pretty, I didn't really like the "and the cure for all my cancers" that seemed really forced.
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Old 09-28-2006, 10:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hmm...it's not bad. Some of it I liked, like when you said "Destroying eachothers youth" that just brought it up. Keep it up.
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Old 09-29-2006, 06:38 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

Isolation, isolation, isolation
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