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TrampInaTux 10-14-2006 04:11 PM

Little things
 
Do I have to ask now?
Is that the way it will work from here on in?
Did it used to be like this?
When did you begin to get beneath my skin?
There are several words I could use
But I need to know which one will work
I'm the one down in the blues
So why am I doing all the work?

CHORUS
It's little things piling on top of
Little things
I wish I could say they don't harm me
Oh, looks like I'm in the wrong again...





All I've got so far.... comments on whether I should progress please

sleepy jack 10-15-2006 12:35 PM

I love the chorus mainy cause its very relatable to me, I think you should continue on it.

Crowe 10-15-2006 02:44 PM

this is the name of a good charolette song.

sleepy jack 10-15-2006 02:51 PM

OMGG

yeah this song is dedicated, this is good charlotte to every kid whoever got picked last gym class THIS IS FOR YOU to every kid who never a date to no school dance THIS IS FOR YOU to every kid WHA to every kid WHAA THIS IS FOR YOU HERE WE GO

*forgets*

Ekset 10-19-2006 06:32 PM

^^ :P

Good start. Chorus is stronger than the intro. Anything added yet?

-Ekset


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