Midas Critics PLEASE (single, song, hands, Hang)

[creepinson]

So we may be recording this song soon. I posted this song before, and didnt get a single post, so im hopin someone could give some input before we have to lay it down for sure.

Make me a Midas
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You gave me a disease that brought the price of life
From a dollar in a dying man’s hand to the fare of the taxi
That brought me from my countries strife
And to the thought that perhaps the

Reason I’ve survived this long is that everything I’ve known is wrong and that the
Treason we’ve lived by all along; was the very hope that made us strong

Do we live to be soldiers?
Or are we soldiers to live
Just long enough to squander God’s gifts?

Do we live to be soldiers?
Or is this living at all;
With children’s lives hanging on a single midnight call?

Needs and Nooses
Needs and Nooses
Needs and Nooses
Needs and Nooses

What’s the point in make believe
If you’re the only one that can,
Extend your arms and with a cry
Defend with broken, battered hands ?

Though I’ve died I
Know I’ll be the
One to take this
Stand!

What’s the point in make believe
If we strangle our sons with needs and nooses?
Gunfire roars above our whispers
Livelihood leads to excuses

What’s the point in make believe
If we’re just here for the sake
Of children who will always know
Today was a mistake?

Though I’d die before I’d fight a war, I’ve given blame worth fighting for.
Though I’d die before I’d fight a war, I’ll kill you and a million more
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There it is, like i said i really need some critics on it cuz its going to have to be finalized soon THANKS