Cinderella
 

There's a screw loose in my head and it's bothered me since birth
I've spent this long fighting hard to find out what I'm worth
and for every step I take, you knock me back another ten
So much time spent falling in it, I forgot what love meant
We painted a picture depicting us in many years time
in our mansion holding hands above the yobbos and the swines
I hope that the picture still remains if I ever need it again
To look back on and gaze into your eyes the downfall of many men

CHORUS
Oh Cinderella you make me kinda funny inside
The world is ours for the taking
Not giving up no no we are too good for that
Oh Cinderella there's a silence in the room
The night is ours to be painting
Red like the colour of our hearts and yes

I shall remain yours unchanged
What I gain defies the pain
I should be feeling by all accounts
You rip the dryness from out my mouth
My Cinderella she knows me well
I would never do that to you...

yobbos?

This is good, I like the first verse the most.

I don't quiet get it in parts though, like I think you're talking to "cinderella" in the first/last verse right? Then you go "my cinderella she knows me well" in a different person viewing. I don't know i'm probaly missing something.

I agree with Crowq. You go from talking to her and then referring to her in the same stanza. However, sometimes I refer to my girlfriend when she is right next to me playfully... maybe it is that? I like the word Yobbo, but what does it mean?