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Old 11-25-2006, 11:25 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default dedicated to you

(verse 1)
i hate to call you up
i hate to interrupt
but can i have just one minute

i wanna hold you close
i want to hear you boast
about your life and all the people in it

first time i saw you girl
needed you in my world
you just took my breath away

look at how far we've come
it would be strange for some
but everything will be okay.

(chorus)
and i need to know if you're giving me all of your heart
because i need to know if you're giving me all of your heart
and i refuse to stay if you're not giving me all of your heart
because i need to hear we wont be wasting time tonight

(verse 2)
i'll take you by the hand
i'll make you understand
that i am here for you always

but you just turn and run
and run towards the sun
girl i hope you'll always stay

i love the way you walk,
i love the way you talk,
i love the way you look at me.

i love the things you do,
i love to be with you,
i love the way im feeling free.

(chorus)

(bridge)
if i have to search for you then i will.
cuz i will never find hapiness otherwise, no i wont.
and the desert, ill cross.
and the ocean, ill sail.
just to be with you, girl
take a breath, yeah inhale
cuz right now im so lost in this ocean of grace that i'll never be home yeah back where i belong.

(piano solo)

(chorus 2x then over)
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Old 12-02-2006, 09:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I got through the first 4 words.
Scrap it, and broaden the horizon a bit with your next projects.
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Old 12-03-2006, 12:04 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I actually liked it a little bit but theres to much ryhming involved
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