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xcult_classicx 12-08-2006 12:40 AM

The Walls Have Eyes But They Need To Speak
 
everything looks so different when you're on top of a three-storey building, now, i've been watching alleyway dramas every night since i was 14, but i've never seen anything as chilling as this.

a girl walked into a corner to take a call from someone (probably her rich metrosexual boyfriend), after seconds, a drunk man kicked out of an italian restaurant comes out of some random corner with a spaghetti stained dinner fork in his hand.

the seconds went by as fast as bullets to friday, and he caught her from behind, she was obviously unaware that a drunk person with a dirty fork was looming behind her like the devil on thanksgiving.

he knocked her out with a fist straight to the back of the neck. draped in the noise of a sprawling metropolis, he undressed her, caressing her gently with his left hand and a dinner fork.

before long, she woke up screaming "STOP IT! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, STOP IT!", he only smiled, kissing her gently and raping her with that spaghetti stained fork.

her hour of hell beside that dumpster captured me and tore my heart into shreds. i was in sheer horror at this sight.

without saying a word, he took her hand, helping her up from a pool of tears, blood, and possibly semen. standing up, she looked into his eyes, embraced him, and said, "i'm in love with my rapist."

yeah, everything looks so different from the top of a three-storey building.
nothing beats this kind of alleyway drama.

dirt mcgirt 12-08-2006 06:26 AM

**** son, finally a song about ****in a bitch in a dumpster.

i like it.
i like it a lot.

dog 12-08-2006 06:53 AM

kind of reminds me of a tom waits' "frank's wild years" , the use of similies, 'fast as bullets on friday' ect.

dirt mcgirt 12-08-2006 07:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ledzeppelinrulz (Post 309128)
kind of reminds me of a tom waits' "frank's wild years" , the use of similies, 'fast as bullets on friday' ect.

'sweatin like r kelly at a miss junior high pageant'

dog 12-08-2006 07:04 AM

eh?

right-track 12-08-2006 02:56 PM

Were you a witness?
Did you call the Police?
How do you know it was spaghetti?
:confused:

swim 12-08-2006 04:16 PM

Lol this sounds like someone who's sick with the stuck up part of the emo scene tried to write something as cliche emo as possible, for that I like it.

RT maybe I'm wrong but he's literally the wall?

right-track 12-08-2006 04:20 PM

I thought they were looking out off a 3 story building. :/

swim 12-08-2006 04:24 PM

How do you know what the typical range of sight is for a wall?

[MERIT] 12-08-2006 04:27 PM

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Originally Posted by swimintheundertow (Post 309305)
How do you know what the typical range of sight is for a wall?

I think you use the Pythagorean Theorum? a^2 + b^2 = c^2

xcult_classicx 12-09-2006 12:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by swimintheundertow (Post 309294)
Lol this sounds like someone who's sick with the stuck up part of the emo scene tried to write something as cliche emo as possible, for that I like it.

RT maybe I'm wrong but he's literally the wall?

well, i tried writing it from the perspective of someone looking down from the building, since it's right next to the rape scene, it's kind of like the building becomes part of the person. in turn, the walls have eyes.

i dunno, i was watching the Simple Life, Saw, and some gangster movies, and i was kind of thinking twice about writing a hardcore song about getting eaten alive by Paris Hilton's vagina, so i wrote this instead.

sleepy jack 12-09-2006 12:29 AM

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Originally Posted by xcult_classicx (Post 309596)
i dunno, i was watching the Simple Life, Saw, and some gangster movies, and i was kind of thinking twice about writing a hardcore song about getting eaten alive by Paris Hilton's vagina, so i wrote this instead.

FUCKING DO IT

xcult_classicx 12-09-2006 12:36 AM

i will, still gathering ideas. :P


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