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ZeppelinAir 01-08-2007 02:44 PM

Does Anyone Know
 
bored and need something to do, resaults below

Does anyone Know

What came of the mystical angels wings,
The Magic surrounded every word spoken,
How come I couldn’t see what became of the hours from times ago,
And where are they now, thrown away behind your eyes,
From a useless mess of speech and anger that came from every breathe,

Does anyone know where the time all goes,
Does anyone know when the angels will show,
Does anyone know why they would all sink so low,
Does anyone know where this gale will blow,
Will anyone ever know where the love goes…

Stars that gleam and seem to show what lies ahead,
But I’m always afraid that I might end up dead,
Contradicting everything in my head,
Trying to forget every piercing word you said,
And healing all the wounds that bleed,

Does anyone know where the time all goes,
Does anyone know when the angels will show,
Does anyone know why they would all sink so low,
Does anyone know where this gale will blow,
Will anyone ever know where the love goes…

angel18 01-09-2007 11:07 AM

It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it.

Angel

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 01-09-2007 02:15 PM

Black dotzorz.

ZeppelinAir 01-09-2007 10:26 PM

i dont usauly rhyme in mine too much, and i thought it might need to be a little longer, i'll work on it


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