My last supper (bands, song, Hang)

creepinson · 02-05-2007, 04:21 PM

sup queers... i just recorded this song this weekend, and its going to be on my bands upcoming ep... hope you enjoy

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My last supper
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What if tomorrow never comes?
We wasted all our lives away starting at the sun
Through the cracks in walls and through the iron bars
Keeping faith so useless that it could only be ours

We paint the city streets one day at a time
Blending blood from each our midnight brawls
With a white outline of our most desperate crime
Our masterpieces find us homes inside these concrete halls

What if I’m not supposed to hate
My place in this wall of orange made by these inmates
As I stay awake to read your mail
Laughing at your letters makes the air taste less stale

Now I know I’m never getting out
It’s not as if there’s anything to return home to now
I’ll seal shut my mouth, there’s nothing left to say
Besides, I’m afraid of letting the life in me get away

Oh the bread,
And Oh the wine
Will never make tonight feel fine

Oh the food
And Oh the drink
Won’t let me bear to think

Oh this man
And Oh his prayer
Won’t send my dead ass anywhere

The end of your life writ in blood
Well mine’s now writ in ink

Whether this struggle left me with signs or sins
At least I now know that this must begin
With a life I chose to leave incomplete
and yet the concrete still dirties my feet
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you know the deal

ZeppelinAir · 02-05-2007, 04:47 PM

not too bad

Loser · 02-05-2007, 04:47 PM

I like it, keep up the good work dude.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 02-05-2007, 07:57 PM

Pretty good stuff.
"We paint the city streets one day at a time
Blending blood from each our midnight brawls
With a white outline of our most desperate crime
Our masterpieces find us homes inside these concrete halls"
^ Really good. Really, really good.

Crowe · 02-05-2007, 09:33 PM

Where in the hell have you been?

either/or · 02-05-2007, 10:01 PM

What if tomorrow never comes?

Oh this man
And Oh his prayer
Won’t send my dead ass anywhere

other than these lines it's real good. thumbs up

angel18 · 02-06-2007, 06:51 AM

I have to agree with either/or about changing that line to what he suggested. Other than that it's pretty good.

Angel

02-05-2007, 04:21 PM	#1 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	My last supper sup queers... i just recorded this song this weekend, and its going to be on my bands upcoming ep... hope you enjoy ---------------------------------------------- My last supper ---------------------------------------------- What if tomorrow never comes? We wasted all our lives away starting at the sun Through the cracks in walls and through the iron bars Keeping faith so useless that it could only be ours We paint the city streets one day at a time Blending blood from each our midnight brawls With a white outline of our most desperate crime Our masterpieces find us homes inside these concrete halls What if I’m not supposed to hate My place in this wall of orange made by these inmates As I stay awake to read your mail Laughing at your letters makes the air taste less stale Now I know I’m never getting out It’s not as if there’s anything to return home to now I’ll seal shut my mouth, there’s nothing left to say Besides, I’m afraid of letting the life in me get away Oh the bread, And Oh the wine Will never make tonight feel fine Oh the food And Oh the drink Won’t let me bear to think Oh this man And Oh his prayer Won’t send my dead ass anywhere The end of your life writ in blood Well mine’s now writ in ink Whether this struggle left me with signs or sins At least I now know that this must begin With a life I chose to leave incomplete and yet the concrete still dirties my feet ---------------------------------------------- you know the deal

02-05-2007, 04:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	not too bad __________________ not that old signature

02-05-2007, 09:33 PM	#5 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	Where in the hell have you been? __________________

02-05-2007, 10:01 PM	#6 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 352	What if tomorrow never comes? Oh this man And Oh his prayer Won’t send my dead ass anywhere other than these lines it's real good. thumbs up __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

02-05-2007, 04:47 PM	#3 (permalink)
Loser The Professor Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: New York City Posts: 1,113	I like it, keep up the good work dude.

02-06-2007, 06:51 AM	#7 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	I have to agree with either/or about changing that line to what he suggested. Other than that it's pretty good. Angel