Magical Dream Land (dancing, psychedelic, rock, beatles, song)

[17lH_8791_Pl38]

This is a really weird song I wrote the other when I was extremley bored and seeing all these visions in my mind thats why its basically pointless. It has no real structure and a couple of Beatles references. Most of my friends like it and I just wanted to see what you guys think of it.

(Spoken Word)
Once upon a time there was a place
Far beyond where anyone had ever been before
No one had seen these Magical things that were a Mystery
No one had known the Peace and Love that existed here
Only the lucky ever get a chance to see inside this…
Magical Dream Land

My mind may take myself away
Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path
On a journey around a Magical Dream Land

Start at the gates that open this wondrous world
Step on the path that will take you as far as you can go
Going past I see Fandermei gardens with Grandinash trees
Walk to a cliff at the end of the hill and start to fly

As I’m in the multicoloured sky with the silver lined clouds
I see a girl wondering ‘round looking for someone to talk with
Landing safely on the pink grass, I look at her face in the sun
Her eyes that are green are glowing like nothing I’ve seen before

My mind may take myself away
Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path
On a journey around a Magical Dream Land

Little creatures are running around everywhere they never stop
Sharing their friendship among each other
As the girl with the bright glowing eyes looks down to touch them
I look up to see there are unicorns in the sky

They’re floating among the shinning stars, which are lighting up
Right near an ice cube I see some penguins
It feels all so weird this place but nothing like this has ever been before
When will the time go away?

My mind may take myself away
Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path
On a journey around a Magical Dream Land

Take a look at her while she looks at me we’re dancing in the moonshine
The colours of blue and green collide
Walk in the Strawberry Field holding hands and laughing in the sunshine
Peace and Love may reign in our hearts

Psychedelic Rainbow Kaleidoscope visions take over the sky
As the rain comes down we stay outside
Holding each other so close together when it’s coming down
It’s a just a dream love

Lips meet in the center of the park as the rain comes to a stop
Then we take a seat on the grass
We look up into the colourful sky where spells are cast
And the fireworks of Love come fill the air

My mind may take myself away
Into a place where my dreams I see will be a path
On a journey around a Magical Dream Land

[PaperHurricanesAndPlanes]

This reminds me of Spinal Tap, there "Stonehenge" in particular. No, that's not a good thing, considering they were mocking rock.