A Note on the Inside
 

I cannot stand these feelings that,
Cause me to plan my every day,
Because of them my heart is flat,
My loved ones are the ones that pay,
I understand the formulas,
But from them I have no reward,
I know what every program does,
And from my muse I am assured,
Its for the future of our lives,
This must be done - this is required,
I have to question, is this strife?
And all the pain that I've acquired
Worth the destruction of my heart
Or should I play another part

well it kept reading pretty easly, its got pretty good rhyming, but there was something about it that was a little dull, but i cant exactly say what

I cannot stand these feelings that,
Cause me to plan my every day,
Because of them my heart is flat,

Those three lines were just really blegh, the rest is solid though.