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02-20-2007, 09:49 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Dinosaurus Rex!!!
Join Date: Nov 2005
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My Super Meaningful Song
Okay guys, this song means a lot to me, I wrote it when I was like 14 years old. If you don't get it, it's because you don't understand my meanings.
I am a heart of emotion And there is blood in my body. She is dead to me now I am dead to myself. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. My hands are shaking because I am so cold At the thought of losing her, But now she is gone, And I'm pulling out my hair. Life is so hard without you I wanted you to know I miss you And I will die if you don't return I will die if you don't return. Why are we dying so slowly? All I wanted was for us to live And love And grow old. But now she is gone, And I am thinking that life isn't worth living. Anymore. |
02-20-2007, 11:47 AM | #2 (permalink) |
In a very sad sad zoo
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: "Out on tour with Smashing Pumpkins, nature kids, they don't have no function"
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Is this a parody of somebody?
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02-20-2007, 03:45 PM | #5 (permalink) |
Im Just As Sweet!!!:)
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I really like this.I even think this is the best song poem ive ever read that I really liked
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02-20-2007, 10:36 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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that's pretty good, I take it as you were saying that as you get older, it becomes harder and harder to stay who u are, and stay in touch w/ your feelings. I don't find anything wrong w/ these lyrics. The only thing destructive is not giving a voice to those kind of feelings. Unfortunately, I think a lot of people do that in our society, so this means that you're really trying. Keep writing, good stuff!!
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02-22-2007, 03:32 AM | #10 (permalink) | |
They call me Tundra Boy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In your linen cupboard.
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Please, for the emotional health of our future children, I implore you to bring out your dead. |
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