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Old 02-24-2007, 05:48 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Alright honestly, A perfect sonnet, I just said I liked this to make u feel better. Your poem sounds very suicidal, and I thought it might help u. Although, since you're obviously feeling very strong now to come in my thread and bash my awesome poem, let me say that this poem reeks of codependency, one of the saddest states that afflicts people in our society today. Codependency is one person feeling so badly about themselves that they feel they actually need another person to provide self-esteem for them, so as long as u want me to be that provider, you'll hav nothing bad to say about me,
now get back in formation.
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Old 02-24-2007, 05:50 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Alright honestly, A perfect sonnet, I just said I liked this to make u feel better. Your poem sounds very suicidal, and I thought it might help u. Although, since you're obviously feeling very strong now to come in my thread and bash my awesome poem, let me say that this poem reeks of codependency, one of the saddest states that afflicts people in our society today. Codependency is one person feeling so badly about themselves that they feel they actually need another person to provide self-esteem for them, so as long as u want me to be that provider, you'll hav nothing bad to say about me,
now get back in formation.
Your post reeks of idiocy, which is a sadder thing that afflicts people in our society today.
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Old 02-24-2007, 05:51 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Dude, you realise this is meant to be paying out another member on the boards writing right? APS writes a crapload better poems.
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Old 02-24-2007, 07:06 PM   #14 (permalink)
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It was a joke Crowquill, I wouldn't ever want to provide anyone w/ self esteem except myself, but it's sad we live in a world where people usually look for other people or material things to do it.
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Dude, you realise this is meant to be paying out another member on the boards writing right? APS writes a crapload better poems.
This is meant to be paying out another member on the boards writing right?
I hav no idea what this means.
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Old 02-24-2007, 07:29 PM   #16 (permalink)
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It means you don't understand blatant satire.
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Old 02-24-2007, 07:41 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Alright honestly, A perfect sonnet, I just said I liked this to make u feel better. Your poem sounds very suicidal, and I thought it might help u. Although, since you're obviously feeling very strong now to come in my thread and bash my awesome poem, let me say that this poem reeks of codependency, one of the saddest states that afflicts people in our society today. Codependency is one person feeling so badly about themselves that they feel they actually need another person to provide self-esteem for them, so as long as u want me to be that provider, you'll hav nothing bad to say about me,
now get back in formation.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Wow. did you just finish your psychology unit in grade seven health class? Thanks for the little vocabulary lesson there buddy, I wouldn't have been able to understand your post without that wonderful explanation that doesn't AT ALL sound like a copy-paste job from a 12 year old's entry on wikipedia.

Now since you obviously don't understand satire, let me break down my response for you. I'm not actually thankful for the vocabulary lesson, but by expressing gratitude in such an obviously overblown way, I actually mean the opposite of what I say. The emphasis on "at all" in the last part of the sentece, accomplishes the same thing by emphasizing the satirical aspect of the statement in an obvious way, thereby expressing that it did indeed sounds like a copy-paste job from a 12 year old's entry on wikipedia.

Now, lets take this lesson, and apply it to Ben's post. Is this poem particualrly meaningful? Not especially, it sounds like the typicaly overly emotional, but painfully cliche lyrics that a teenager would write. Now, when did Ben state that he wrote this? That's right, at 14 years old. Therefore, we can deduce that he was, in fact, making a joke at his own 14-year-old-self's expense, in order to amuse the musicbanter community.
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Old 02-24-2007, 07:58 PM   #19 (permalink)
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gosh, jibber, u are such a loser
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