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fitzrulz 03-12-2007 12:46 PM

Quite a change
 
Wrote this song about someone:
When I Stare

She's got that same Blue on her eyes
Like she had before
She's wearing that very perfume
That makes me scream for more.
Dressed in seductive black
Red bow in her hair
It's like a deja vu
Because when I stare:

She mezmerizes me
And hypnotizes me
It mystifies me
But it makes me smile

How does she do this to me?
Is it even intentional?
I'm going crazy as she sways
And then she looks my way
Her brown eyes
Took me by surprise
It's like a deja vu
Coz I know when I stare:

She mezmerizes me
And hypnotizes me
It mystifies me
But it makes me smile

Then about a week later:

Malaise

Breaking down inside
Losing all of my pride
Once I was lost in you, now I’m just lost
Can’t think of what to say
Can’t seem to find my way.
Is there no one here who can HELP?

My head’s a thousand miles from my heart
How did they get so far apart?
Off this beaten path I’ve strayed
If only I could restart…
Can you see malaise in my face?

If clocks could turn back
Before this downward spiral
Would I find a way to avoid this viral agony?
Attack after attack
Is there no way back?
Is there no one here who can HELP?

My head’s a thousand miles from my heart
How did they get so far apart?
Off this beaten path I’ve strayed
If only I could restart…
Can you see malaise in my face?

If I could relive that night
Would I do things alright?
Would it be the same as before?
I try not to reminisce
Over everytime we’ve kissed but
It’s just no good
It’s just no good

My head’s a thousand miles from my heart
How did they get so far apart?
Off this beaten path I’ve strayed
If only I could restart…
Can you see malaise in my face?

ZeppelinAir 03-12-2007 01:36 PM

they got a very mainstream feel to em. i like em though, but be warned there will be the ones who dont like this sorta of stuff so expect alot of critisism


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