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THERACONTEUR21 03-12-2007 08:40 PM

concern
 
i play guitar this is one my more complete songs it sounds good if you can find the rythym verses 1 and 3 are ame chords same timing
v 2 and 4 are the same

v1
When you scream, scream for peace
but all that answers you,
is your habitual diease

v2
but its your right as a person
its your god given gift
to assume you know the people
to look through andddddddddd sift

v3
Gb G5 Gb G5
but didnt he once say peace is a desired pasture
Gb G5
as we lay in and graze
Gb G5
to forget the diaster

v4
d
then their was you
e
such a positive youth
b
before you knew the answers
d b
before you knew. you knew the truth

chorus
g5 a5
all i need is an answer of faith
g5 b5 (continue with cords)
to know the next person wont just look at my face
but try to find out what they can learn
by looking for the people that dosnt hold concern

its about loving people and not caring where their from
it has a lot to do with with religion also

THERACONTEUR21 03-12-2007 08:42 PM

i eally like this one listen to its words and meaning
and if you play guitar play it you might like it
be nice

THERACONTEUR21 03-12-2007 08:43 PM

ps i didnt have any spell check on any of them
please open-minded rationalization
peace

A_Perfect_Sonnet 03-13-2007 09:56 AM

This thread is a waste of the internet.

acratertocoffin 03-13-2007 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by THERACONTEUR21 (Post 348762)
ps i didnt have any spell check on any of them
please open-minded rationalization
peace

Use the fucking EDIT button!

TheUsedToolguy 03-13-2007 05:18 PM

I'm not quite sure I understood this one
v1
Quote:

When you scream, scream for peace
but all that answers you,
is your habitual diease
To me, it means that no matter how much a person might want peace in the world, it's not going to matter to a lot of people who care about little more than (capitalism)
v2
Quote:

but its your right as a person
its your god given gift
to assume you know the people
to look through andddddddddd sift
hmmm, not sure, sift through their emotions? sift through their vibes? I do that sometimes

v3
Gb G5 Gb G5
Quote:

but didnt he once say peace is a desired pasture
Gb G5
as we lay in and graze
Gb G5
to forget the diaster
v4
I don't know who *he* is, but that gives it a sense of mystery
d
Quote:

then their was you
e
such a positive youth
b
before you knew the answers
d b
before you knew. you knew the truth
I thought about how, when I was a child, there were certain people I didn't trust, didn't want to trust. As you get older, you try to tell yourself you can trust people, and you just have to learn to play the game. But, before you learned about all the rules and how some people want to be lied to, and mistreated, before that you just had your instincts, and maybe some people would be better to just trust their instincts, and forget the game.
chorus
g5 a5
Quote:

all i need is an answer of faith
g5 b5 (continue with cords)
to know the next person wont just look at my face
but try to find out what they can learn
by looking for the people that dosnt hold concern
I may have misconstrued it, but it seemed like you were saying you want people to not be so judgmental and place labels, but then you sarcastically said, 'nah, that doesn't hold concern,' because in a world where so many people care much about themselves and their inner family and don't have a great worldly concern, they say, nah I don't see how that can help me. They're only discarding their own heart, which probably wasn't that big to begin with.


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