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Jadix 04-10-2007 11:10 AM

Dance with the Ocean
 
I saw a naked boy
run away from waves
And he chased them down
As they slid away

I would participate
But my youth was glass
Though I want to try
When I hear them crash

And it makes me sad
That he'll never win
That he'll be like me
Disenchanted Man

zak 04-10-2007 01:12 PM

I like it, especially the "...youth was glass..." part.

Crowe 04-16-2007 02:25 AM

yeah pretty cool little piece here. but what is the youth was glass line... i liked it but maybe if you gave us a look at the youth?


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