Fix
 

Verse 1:

Innocent, sweet, pure female
In modest cloth, proper attire
Weak, frail, ripe, ready
Satisfaction guaranteed

Uncontrollable carnal urge
Erectile desire to be inside her
No regard for her body or soul
Another shot to keep my high

Chorus:

I need my fix
My addiction to agony
A yearning for release
An orgasm through cruelty

Verse 2:

I slashed through the fabric so thin
I revealed the forbidden orbs of sin
Quivered and whimpered, a waste of time
My desire for brutality such a crime?

Pinned to the ground, my fix was due
The inevitable breach, erect with glee
I thrust through the forest, broke the purity
Crimson and seed flowing like the Nile

Chorus:

I need my fix
My addiction to agony
A yearning for release
An orgasm through cruelty

Interlude:

Her gates defiled and ruined
The milky surface slashed and wounded
My seed has been sewn for the day
I'll be eager to return to reap my rewards

No satisfaction felt, my fix dead
Need more power, another hit of maim
Grabbing the once shimmering strands on her head
I stifle the noise as I feast on the pain

(guitar solo)

Outro:

Flat on the ground, covered in lust
Red flowing out, flesh cold as a rock
I live for the sin, suffering just
Feed on the thrill, terror, and shock

Buried, preserved for another day
Innocent no more, dormant in hell
To be continued, my lifeless precious
Until next time I need my fix

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not gonna lie, thats kind of creepy bro...

I was trying something different. To be honest, most of my songs are Star Wars themed songs since I'm in a Star Wars metal band (laugh), but lately, I've been trying to expand my horizons. This would be one of those expansions.

You should have read it before. This is the second draft. First one was all blunt and full of cliche gore. I'm trying to die it down on the upfront imagery and make it suitable for a slow, melancholy, yet morbid sounding song. It was to be a typical grindcore song, but I thought...."no."

Besides, if you watch SVU and "Hellraiser" as much as I do, what would you expect? HAHA.

Wow. I'm gonna go and weep now. SVU <3, though.

I've added some revisions to it, as well as a MIDI of the music I wrote for it. I was going to have it be some fast short death metal song, but I wanted to try something I haven't before.

Tell me if you have trouble downloading it. It's in the first post.