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Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 04-24-2007 10:50 PM

Darth Sion: Lord of Pain
 
One of my Star Wars songs, one in a three-piece concept thing about each of the Sith Lords from KOTOR 2.

Broken, yet whole
Dark force to be reckoned
Held together by anger
Enslaved by his hatred

Vengeance on mind
Death to all Jedi
The force as his weapon
Darkness, his ally

Darth Sion
Lord of Pain
Darth Sion
Master of maim

Darth Sion
Lord of Pain
Darth Sion
Master of maim

He knows naught of wisdom
Knowledge of agony is his power
Crushing all opposition
Weaklings everywhere cower

The bones, the flesh, splintered and scarred
The Dark Side keeping the Dark Lord alive
Strike him down and he becomes stronger
A god amongst the ancient deities

Blood stains his crimson blade
Blood stains his crimson blade
Blood stains his crimson blade
The blood of the Jedi he has slain

Brutal power and might
Black flows in his veins
A charred heart keeps it pumping
Striking down the lords of the light

(Quote; Dialogue between Sion and Kreia;
Sion: "I sense you, my master. Faint, weak."
Kreia: "Your senses betray you, as you betrayed me."
Sion: "After all that has happened, still you live? You are difficult to kill."
Kreia: "For one as limited as you, perhaps. To have fallen so far and learned nothing, that is your failing."
Sion: "The failure is yours! No longer do your whispers crawl within my skull! No longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us! And now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead, save one. And one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come.)

A slave no more to her teachings
A slave no more to her teachings
A slave no more to her teachings
The student is free from the broken master

Darth Sion
Lord of Pain
Darth Sion
Master of maim

Darth Sion
Lord of Pain
Darth Sion
Master of maim

Hail Darth Sion,
Sith Lord of Pain!

Ace 04-24-2007 10:57 PM

No offense man, but you should just stop writing completely...
Are you just starting out?

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 04-24-2007 11:11 PM

No, I've been writing for a couple months now.

It probably would make more sense if you knew the character more. Have you played KOTOR II?

Darth Sion - Wookieepedia, the Star Wars Wiki

Ace 04-24-2007 11:14 PM

Yeah, that explains it.
Everything you write for the first 5 months will usually be crappy.
I got a couple of gems in my first year, but it takes a while before you get into the flow.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 04-25-2007 05:48 PM

Don't write about Star Wars. Seriously.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 04-25-2007 07:29 PM

Too late. This isn't the only song. I'll post more later.

Star Wars rules.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes 04-25-2007 08:49 PM

Hey, I love Star Wars. But writing songs about it...is just stupid. Please don't.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 04-25-2007 09:05 PM

Hey, if Shat can write about ****, tits, and sticking it in double double chins, then I can write about Darth Vader.:bringit:


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