Checkpoint Bomb
I do love Seth Lakeman and all his folk songs about dying or war or soldiers dying in conflict, but the characters are usually seafaring or farming types who lived a few hundred years ago. I thought I'd go for a similar style but make it much more contemporary.
I've written it out as vocal phrases, which is why most of the lines are very short! Checkpoint Bomb If I Had been Afraid To die The life Of a soldier I would not Have chosen As mine So weep If you will Blame Those I Followed here But do not pretend The choice was not mine Although I did not choose this end I chose to be here Where my body Has turned into sand My body Has turned into sand Carried by desert wind The ash to which I burn From whence I came I return At my checkpoint There came A driver With distant eyes His gaze Met mine We were both prepared to die His arm A single twitch The laws of science Did the rest Thunderclap Flash of light A gust of air And we were gone My body Has turned into sand My body Has turned into sand Carried by desert wind The ash to which I burn From whence I came I return |
Try making the longer lines shorter so it flows better.
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