six touches a day (lyrics, track, quote, songs)

joyboyo53 · 06-26-2007, 02:54 PM

i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back

obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.

AriVolk · 06-29-2007, 03:15 PM

I like it, definately seems catchy...

MHDTV · 07-04-2007, 08:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jgd85

i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back

obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.

Very Kiedist(By the Way era). I can hear it perfectly as a Chili Peppers song...Quite catchy.

06-26-2007, 02:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
joyboyo53 down the rabbit hole Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: the mountain called monkey Posts: 764	six touches a day i miss my, baby girl the one i hold without a care in the world shes my light, through the night i miss my, baby girl she told me six touches a day will keep the doctor away i laughed with slight dismay but she was right (silent beat) people always tell you love is this and love is that but a poet couldnt express quite where im at im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free i could be your prey for all eternity i wrote this song just for you in case you start to feel a little blue play this track and know that i love you and i want you back obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.

06-29-2007, 03:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
AriVolk Groupie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 8	I like it, definately seems catchy...