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Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 07-13-2007 01:14 PM

Darth Traya; Lord of Betrayal
 
Verse 1:

Her teachings reject
Deemed damning by the light
Stifling the night
Cast out by both

Betrayed, broken
Lacerated spine
Scarred shell of a woman
Blinded by trechery

Chorus:

Darth Traya
Lord of Betrayal
Has been betrayed
And will betray back

Exiled by the Jedi
Stripped by the Sith
The Force as her enemy
Kill the noise


Not finished, obviously.

right-track 07-13-2007 01:18 PM

The thought of a 'Lord Of Betrayal' being betrayed...

...made me lol.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 (Post 380784)


Not finished, obviously.

^ Best bit.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 07-13-2007 01:30 PM

It's a three-piece thing I'm doing with the three Sith Lords from KOTOR II.

She's called the Lord of Betrayal because she knows betrayal. Just like Darth Sion is called the Lord of Pain because he knows pain, and Darth Nihilus is the Lord of Hunger because he knows hunger.

either/or 07-28-2007 06:32 AM

HAHAHAHA oh man this is freaking perfect im playing that game right now! I'm not too far in, im 75% dark side and being attacked by the sith lords female assassin on the ebon hawk and i totally dont even have a lightsaber yet i hate that it in the first KOTOR they gave you one pretty quickly man whats the deal with that ****. yeah but its the sickest game except im playing it on an xbox360 not original so it slows down and i know in america it wouldnt because american xboxes have proper backwards compatibility software in them but in australian they didnt put proper ones in ours cus they **** on aussie gamers like totally like how the ps3 costs 1000 dollars over here!!!!!!!!!!!!

1000 DOLLARS!!!

fuc k en hell lol

tdoc210 07-28-2007 05:24 PM

i lold

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 07-29-2007 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by either/or (Post 383642)
HAHAHAHA oh man this is freaking perfect im playing that game right now! I'm not too far in, im 75% dark side and being attacked by the sith lords female assassin on the ebon hawk and i totally dont even have a lightsaber yet i hate that it in the first KOTOR they gave you one pretty quickly man whats the deal with that ****. yeah but its the sickest game except im playing it on an xbox360 not original so it slows down and i know in america it wouldnt because american xboxes have proper backwards compatibility software in them but in australian they didnt put proper ones in ours cus they **** on aussie gamers like totally like how the ps3 costs 1000 dollars over here!!!!!!!!!!!!

1000 DOLLARS!!!

fuc k en hell lol

YEAH! BOOY! SIEG HAIL KOTOR! [/totalstarwarsfanboy]



Obviously, these lyrics suck, but do any of you think the subject matter is alright?

Ornette 07-29-2007 08:31 PM

Not if you do it so blatantly. Disguise a bit more with metaphor or something, cause coming right out and being all "JEDI VS SITH LORD OF BETRAYAL DIE DIE DIE" won't get you taken too seriously.

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 08-01-2007 01:09 AM

I didn't think my verse was too blatant.

either/or 08-01-2007 02:22 AM

hey voice of the soul where can i find a red lightsaber crystal? i wanna cement my sithliness

Voice_of_the_Soul12,13,01 08-01-2007 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by either/or (Post 385146)
hey voice of the soul where can i find a red lightsaber crystal? i wanna cement my sithliness

YOu mean in the game, or in real life?


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