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Ace 07-30-2007 09:33 PM

Everything
 
Everything
07/31/07


[-----Verse 1-----]

Tell me why you would move on
And leave me hangin' in the air
Tell me why I can't let go
And give me reasons why I care

After all, the things you've done to me
I still forgive and then forget
And yet, you still lie through your teeth
Just tell me why you can't repent

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Tell me - everything
Tell me, everything
Tell me - everything

Everything

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 2-----]

I still can't believe you've done
The only thing that can set me off
And now my thoughts become a rift
That even the longest time can't mend

And since my mind is my only home
I'll lock my door, and carry on
Just tell me why you would regress
And leave me hangin' like you did

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Tell me - everything
Tell me, everything
Tell me - everything (x2)

Everything

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 3-----]

/slower

Did I let you leave without - a simple test of your integrity?
I'd never let you leave without - a way to pay you back for your deceit

/pace faster, yet similar to chorus

I know you couldn't say
Everything you had in mind
Just tell me all your thoughts
And everything will come to light

[-----End Verse 3-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

Tell me - everything
Tell me, everything
Tell me - everything (x2)

Everything

[-----End Chorus-----]





MHDTV 07-31-2007 09:21 PM

Seems like you say the same thing a lot in the verses. Nice poetry though.

Ace 07-31-2007 10:44 PM

Err...might be cause it's song lyrics, not poetry. :|

MHDTV 07-31-2007 11:31 PM

Song lyrics are a form of poetry. I'm telling to differentiate between the verses a little more.


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