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dianao3094 04-15-2012 07:53 PM

hey thanks that is an awesome song!

dianao3094 04-15-2012 07:55 PM

hey can i use your lyrics that is just an awesome lyrics!

dianao3094 04-15-2012 07:55 PM

what r u talking about dude you dont need to add anything else!

lecterz12 04-19-2012 04:48 AM

great lyrics man! i also admire you, it takes some guts to show us that piece of art you have there! :)i also think of an acoustic way of playing the song, eith smooth tunes and catchy notes. simple enough to make it a rock and not an emo song. :)

Mikayla 06-09-2012 09:43 PM

hey i am making a video t othis as soon as i find my camera xD

theresa 10-27-2012 05:54 AM

who thinks this is better

I walking down the road

in the darkness had no light

i don't know were to go

and im walking around on my own

and im trying to find my way

'cause stuck in the darkness everyday

and, i am
missing you, and
i realy want you back, but
you'll never know
that i love you.....

when i am near you,
i try to talk but,
no words come out,
and i miss my chance with you


and i am,
missing you, and
i want you back, 'cause
you'll never know
that i love you......

some people say
there are other fish in the sea
but your the only one for me
and ill never forget
the good times that
we had the time we were together

and i am
missing you and
want you back
'cause you will never know
that i love you
and i need you
and i lost all my chances with you

now its me on my own and i will
never go go go.[/COLOR]

yeomanlover 02-27-2013 01:05 AM

Hai Kevin i was reading you lyrics and loved them but i was thinking for the chorus, miss you, and
want you, but
you'll never know
how i feel, about you..... i think if you make it

miss you, and
want you, but
you'll never know
the truth i feel about you.......

please reply your thought well if you want i would love to know how you feel about the

~~~~~~~ yeomanlover

Bayleybeats 03-12-2013 04:36 PM

If you ever needed any instrumentals to go with it you could always come my way :P

ThatBlueFluffyDude 03-16-2013 11:33 AM

May have a look at these at a later date, and if i do do something with it, it will be posted here xD

Dougdenslowe 03-23-2013 01:11 AM

Are you serious?


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