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Jadix 01-08-2008 01:39 PM

I get older everytime
 
I flew all alone on an airplane
Gazing at the safety out the window
As children cried wishing they were at home
I wondered if I should call her on the airphone

I sat down with her at a table
Searching out the window for an answer
Surrounded by the sound of fake laughter
I wondered of the motives she was after

I stood there stranded on a grass hill
Staring at the people past her shoulder
Knowing its the last time that i'll hold her
And suddenly I felt a little older

CHORUS:
When that women comes around
I find myself speaking aloud
All the thoughts I know will get me nowhere
I can never understand
Why I stand the game at hand
When everytime I play I get older

'Cause everytime I play I grow older

Jadix 01-17-2008 10:01 AM

nada eh?

Jadix 01-31-2008 05:04 PM

100+ and nothing.

enemyat_thesix 02-01-2008 03:38 PM

i like the third stanza all right; the second is very awkward; in the first "airphone" seems a tad cheesy

i like the last two lines and overall idea of the chorus


that's all I have to say.

Jadix 02-03-2008 02:24 PM

cool thanks

Dizzys in the wolf 02-03-2008 03:04 PM

Growing up and older is a really important topic for me, and I touch on it a lot. Its cool to see someone else talking about it as well. I liked it, I didn't really like the first stanza though. But its a good song :)


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