Jadix

I dont really care if you dont reply, but hopefully you read through it. thanks.

I want to waste tonight.
I want to waste outright.
I want to take my time,
and erase that curving line.

I want to make sweet limes.
I want to taste new crimes.
I want to fake my rhymes,
and make believe its my life.

CHORUS:
But its alright.
'Cause in my mind
I'm the leader of a world
that's run on lies.
Its not all right.
I don't know why
I don't care more
for my sinking life.

I feel like I'm lead.
I feel light instead.
I feel so f*cking high,
I can see my eyes turning red.

I feel like I'm dead.
I feel like more meds.
I feel like everyone,
I just got a different head.

CHORUS:
But its alright.
'Cause in my mind
I'm the leader of a world
that's run on lies.
Its not all right.
I don't know why
I don't care more
for my sinking life.
But its alright.
'Cause in my mind
I'm the leader of a world
that's run on lies.
Its not all right.
I don't know why
I don't care more
for my sinking life.

alexiscastillo

i love you're lyrics.

any advise for a beginner?
i have been singing and performing overall for 9 years and i just cant seem to write lyrics very well; i tend to get writers block.

i'm into the whole indie/acoustic scene and want to write somethjing leaning towards that.

Nicktarist

@alexiscastillo, read your poetry out loud to people. It helps you figure out what works for you and what doesn't. You'd be suprised at how good you'd get by doing that.

peace out,
-nick

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