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jono95 01-25-2009 02:44 PM

Thoughts? - First ever attempt...
 
this is my first ever attempt at writing a song. It might be rubbish so please be honest...

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

I must have known you for about two years now
And ever since I've known
That you're the one I want, I need and I must
Be with forever

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Maybe you don't like me
But what are the chances of that?
Even so, I wont be able to take it
so do it for my sake

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Boy you are just too irresistible
Anyone with a heart would want a piece of you
But boy please choose me to cut the cake!

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Tell me that you love me
Just please tell me that you love me
I love you
So just love me back
How hard can it be?

Do you love me?


I wrote it in 5 minutes. Comments?

Ziah 01-25-2009 03:55 PM

Nice work for 5 minutes. Do you have a melody for it yet?

buttons 01-25-2009 04:57 PM

Its not too bad to be fair, is the song influenced by someone in your life haha?

sleepy jack 01-26-2009 12:48 PM

http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...nevermore.html


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