I wrote this ages ago but you might like it
Dirty old river, must you keep rolling
Flowing into the night People so busy, makes me feel dizzy Taxi light shines so bright But I dont need no friends As long as I gaze on waterloo sunset I am in paradise Every day I look at the world from my window But chilly, chilly is the evening time Waterloo sunsets fine Terry meets julie, waterloo station Every friday night But I am so lazy, dont want to wander I stay at home at night But I dont feel afraid As long as I gaze on waterloo sunset I am in paradise Every day I look at the world from my window But chilly, chilly is the evening time Waterloo sunsets fine Millions of people swarming like flies round waterloo underground But terry and julie cross over the river Where they feel safe and sound And the dont need no friends As long as they gaze on waterloo sunset They are in paradise Waterloo sunsets fine |
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I woulda done this, had I been a mod, lol. |
Hey Ray, those are pretty good lyrics. You should try putting some music to them or something.
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Far too many cliches. e.g; "Millions of people swarming like flies"
And lose this line "But chilly, chilly is the evening time" = cheese on toast. Not bad for a first effort though. |
I liked it - I think it would be interesting to listen to
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I liked it. It was a lot different from msot of the poetry I hear.
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