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Roemilca 04-28-2009 04:55 PM

Here Lies The Truthteller (mathcore)
 
did you turn left or did you turn right
i lost you at the stop sign
your car sped up, my car slowed down
i fucking chased you all over town
if this was an apology i wouldn't be sorry
if this was mythology you would be dead
there's no reason for you to be on your knees
you shouldn't be choking, just giving me head
break downs are for the underappreciated
unoriginal kids, so why not end this with the unoriginal gig
time teller, say hello to Hellen Keller
i'm sure she's just dying to read your lies
time teller, silence damn Old Yeller
this fever is a message (what's it say?)
i'll tell you when you shut your eyes.


it's cheesy, and random, then again the lyrics don't matter as much since it's spazzy and it's pretty hard to understand shrill screams anyways.
well, comment on it now, i guess.

Arya Stark 05-01-2009 05:17 PM

What was the inspiration? I'm kind of curious to know.

And are there no capital letters because you want to make the Proper names more noticeable? Or just because?

I'm very curious to know the story behind this piece...

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN 05-02-2009 12:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roemilca (Post 648384)
did you turn left or did you turn right
i lost you at the stop sign
your car sped up, my car slowed down
i fucking chased you all over town
if this was an apology i wouldn't be sorry
if this was mythology you would be dead
there's no reason for you to be on your knees
you shouldn't be choking, just giving me head
break downs are for the underappreciated
unoriginal kids, so why not end this with the unoriginal gig
time teller, say hello to Hellen Keller
i'm sure she's just dying to read your lies
time teller, silence damn Old Yeller
this fever is a message (what's it say?)
i'll tell you when you shut your eyes.


it's cheesy, and random, then again the lyrics don't matter as much since it's spazzy and it's pretty hard to understand shrill screams anyways.
well, comment on it now, i guess.

then why bother posting them at all. its the only ****ing thing you posted, you didnt post any song that uses the lyrics. we have no music to judge whether the lyrics matter or not, so yes it matters when its the only thing you post. stupid excuse for poor songwriting.

Freebase Dali 05-02-2009 02:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roemilca (Post 648384)
it's cheesy, and random, then again the lyrics don't matter as much since it's spazzy and it's pretty hard to understand shrill screams anyways.
well, comment on it now, i guess.

Unintelligible vocals should never be an excuse for bad lyrics, and vice-versa.
Try writing something meaningful and when you scream the lyrics, try making it understandable. It's the least you can do if you want anyone to take you seriously. Otherwise, all we're listening to is something that really doesn't have any value.


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