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monicaarobsonn 06-27-2009 11:33 AM

[First Ever Song] **FOREVER** By Monica Robson
 
Forever

I really need you right now
I really want you right here
But can't you see that we are both together

When I need you today
You say you can't but tonight
You're gonna be there for me now and forever

[Chorus 1]
Cause I was there when you said forever
Yes I was there when you said forever
You didn't come when you told me you would
And I went head first in the dirt
Cause you think it won't hurt. Oh Yeah.

Two days have passed
Now two weeks have passed
But you haven't called back
There ain't no excuses this time.

[Chorus 2]
Cause I was there when you said forever
Yes I was there when you said forever
You didn't call when you told me you would
And I fell flat out on the floor
Cause you didn't call once more. Yeah Hey Yeah.

[Bridge]
Please
For me
Don't you ever come back
And tell me that you need me

Cause I was there when you said forever
Cause I was there when you said forever
Cause I was there when you said forever
We are not the same
Because you just can't change

[Chorus 3]
Cause I was there when you said forever
Yes I was there when you said forever
I really don't need you now or never
So goodbye for now
Adios and chou. Yeah-ee-yeah hoh-hoh-oh-oh-hoh.

Janszoon 06-27-2009 11:36 AM

Aw, and it's written in comic sans just to add that extra touch of class.

Ricochet~kun 06-27-2009 03:47 PM

ah! very nice. is there already a melody for it, or is it just lyrics?

monicaarobsonn 07-04-2009 12:00 PM

I have been working on it but it's not really happening.
But thank you so much!

Thank you!

BADFASTBUSA 07-11-2009 11:27 AM

I would really like to hear this with a melody... Would you care if someone maybe added some music to this and posted it up for everyone to see? If not, thats cool, but it would be fun to do!

Jim Colyer 07-11-2009 12:29 PM

Honest feelings and thoughts, and I like that.

monicaarobsonn 07-15-2009 12:35 PM

That would be cool because I suck at that kind of stuff! If anybody wants to give it a go then be my guest!

monicaarobsonn 07-15-2009 12:36 PM

Aw thanks!
Thank you so much to all of you!

monicaarobsonn 07-15-2009 12:40 PM

Anybody that wants to write melody for this then please have a go. I am really flattered that you want to hear a melody for it but someone else has to do it because I think Im more of a songwriter!


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