**This Time** By Monica Robson
This Time
I didn't know what I want On the very first day of this life I didnt know what could be Way back then. I always thought that I Was shining so bright in your eyes But I guess I was falling, fading fast That's no surprise! [Chorus] I know you owe me this much When you torture and tangle up my pride You think you're something special But you pushed and tugged me aside. Can't remember what you said From two years back.. this time. Thinking nothing of it But you obviously had something on your mind I had to find out the hard way Again, no surprise! [Chorus] I know you owe me this much When you torture and tangle up my pride You think you're something special But you pushed and tugged me aside. Can't remember what you said From two years back.. this time. [Bridge] Have you thought it through? Made your decision? Doesn't really matter this time 'Cause I already made up mine. Ha-ha! [Chorus] I know you owe me this much When you torture and tangle up my pride You think you're something special But you pushed and tugged me aside. Can't remember what you said From two years back.. this time. |
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"on the very first day of this life" could be "on the very first day" "I didn't know what I want" could be "didn't know what I wanted" "I always thought that I Was shining so bright in your eyes" "Thinking nothing of it But you obviously had something on your mind" I don't know how you sing it but I think it might sound less clunky if you get rid of some unecessary words. |
Yep, I agree about skimming the lines. Although with just the right meter, squeezing in a longer line now and then can sound really nice. Wish I could hear the music.
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Do you have music to this yet? I really like this song. It's got a nice flow and put together with a good tune, could go places.
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