Playa
this is my newest song called playa i wrote it in study hall :D yay, please comment
Playa Dont you look at me like you're wa wantin me when you got a girl thats dumb! Why you flirting with me, when she obiously sees? she was stupid for thinking you #1 (chorus) See i know you're a player All these girls wanna hate ya Im not a machine You smile at me yeah you think you're so cute, when your other chicks accros the room. You simile and wave,yeah just pretend you're just friends, but boy i. aint. a. fool. (chorus) See i know you're a player All these girls wanna hate ya Im not a machine Im not falling for these tricks, dont think im gunna trip and fall for your lies Ive seen you with 3 other girls and that one you just kissed yet you wanna take me out tonight (chorus) See i know you're a player All these girls wanna hate ya I'm not a machine I know all those girls you been messin around with i dont want your STD's. So boy quit with your chat i dont wanna talk about my cat, i dont wanna see your face, now leave. ©Written by Kaitlyn O'Connell February 4th, 2010 All Rights Reserved :beer: |
Amazing
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And stop playing hard to get when you know you'll end up shagging him just to put one over on the other 3. |
Come on you can't argue with the genius of the last 2 lines
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Nah, but seriously, this mos def isn't the best song I've ever seen on here. It's probably not the worst, a while back there was an EXTREMELY angry rap song along the same lines, except it was like 3 pages long. I think in terms of horrible-ness, that's the worst I've seen in my short time being on here. Anyway, there are some technical problems with your song that make it somewhat hard for me to get. The first is that the chorus is three lines long, and while that's not the end of the world if you have a fourth, instrumental, line in there, or one of your lines takes up twice as long as the others, it can sound quite awkward if you don't have one of these things. Quote:
Aside from the fact that that is epic genius if you are a troll, I will assume you are just someone looking for criticism, and thus I will tell you that these lines make me want to shoot myself in the head. Actually, that's going in my sig. |
I have to admit that the metaphor for the word cat was pretty sneaky.
Just a shame she talks like a cunt for the rest of it. |
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I'm pretty sure "You simile and wave" is a metaphor for something really deep but I just can't put my finger on it... maybe it's referring to poetry through sign language? Can a literary genius please help me out here?
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http://www.entropiaforum.com/forums/...es/handjob.gif I believe the wave is a subconcious attempt to comment on the quality of her own poetry through the eyes of her anti hero. |
The last two lines were priceless. Absolutely priceless. I must've be amused for roughly 5minutes straight. Champ.
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I believe what's important in the small excerpt I've quoted, and what most people fail to realise, is that this woman, my friends, is NOT a machine, this I cannot stress enough. So don't be hatin', K? Also, the sheer genius of certain malapropisms such as "wa wantin me", which stems from the Umbundu dialect used in southern Angola, and the shrewdness of the use of "obiously", which is exactly what that verse was asking for, really turn something normal into a brilliant masterpiece. One thing that confuses me, though; do you feel he shouldn't look at you like he was wa wantin you because he's got a girlfriend that's dumb, or do you feel that it's dumb of him to look at you like he's wa wantin you because he has a girlfriend? Also, I agree, she was definitely stupid for thinking him first. (I'd like to get a second opinion, though; because I'm not sure what the fornication that means). That being said, I'm certainly looking forward to more of this fine poetry from katieBABYbitch. |
jesus...! SOMEONE GIVE THIS WOMAN A RECORD DEAL
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Everyone else should just stop writing now.
She outwrote all of you bitches. |
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I'm depressed now. I will never be this good. Inspite of all my wa wantin I will never be a competition to this girl
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This song is so bad that it is a guaranteed hit.
I don't think I spelt Guranteed right. This song must be rubbing off on me with it's stupidity. |
I wanted to add Kaitlyn to facebook but there are too many :(
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