poetry.
i tend to write in short, nonsensical bursts. i haven't had anyone read anything i've written in awhile so i thought i'd give it a go.
someday, these sinewy dreams will be disarmed. we're just stringing along regret. we've become that proverbial c*ck tease. our skirts being chased by that spector of splendor. those spirited aspirations we let drown. i met a girl who let me bide my time. she had two windy, moonlit lakes for eyes. i'll dive in and keep sinking deeper towards the truth. |
Good. But I'd like a little more that goes in a more substantial direction. I can't quite grasp the concept of this one as is, but I like you choice of words and phrasing.
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