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DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 07:57 PM
You
 
Since I've been doing my fair share of criticising I thought I'd post one of my somber works to give you the chance to flame me.

You

It’s raining in my heart today
You’re never here, you’re always far away
The ravens crow, lashed by the rain
A misty view I see again
You never called to me before
Inclement days seen from my door
Just thoughts of you, on my mind dwell
Stopped in my tracks, can't hear the bell
The thunder cracks above my head
The lightning strikes where Wallace bled
I miss you here, your healing kind
There’s nothing left but in my mind
Return to me, you are the one
My solitary days, by you undone
Stand with me, here by my side
To live a life so filled with pride.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 07:58 PM
Me?

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:01 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897992)
Me?
No, me.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 897994)
No, me.
Oh ok. Nevermind then.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897995)
Oh ok. Nevermind then.
If you re-read it, it can be you again if you like.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:06 PM
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Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 897996)
If you re-read it, it can be you again if you like.
That's okay. I'm passing the mantle to you.

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:12 PM
narcissistic prick..of course it's not about you.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:13 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 897997)
That's okay. I'm passing the mantle to you.
:(

Please someone else read it.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:13 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898000)
narcissistic prick..of course it's not about you.
Who?

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:14 PM
you

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:14 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898003)
you
So it IS about me?

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:15 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898003)
you
So it is about me!

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:15 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 898004)
So it IS about me?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898005)
So it is about me!
lol. It's like we planned that.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898005)
So it is about me!
No, it's about ME!

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898006)
lol. It's like we planned that.
I think we both know who planned this...

*glares at OP*

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 898008)
I think we both know who planned this...

*glares at OP*
You!

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898009)
You!
No YOU!!!!

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:17 PM
of course it is. knew i'd find you here.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:18 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898011)
of course it is. knew i'd find you here.
Me?

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:18 PM
i didnt plan anything. it just happened.

DiegoArmando 07-10-2010 08:24 PM
****. what a waste of two hours getting to 15 posts.

The [won't give you the satisfaction] isn't my band but I can't stop listening to their 3 tracks on myspace. They are mates of mine from Edinburgh. Extremely hard-working and highly talented musicians.

[Link and boring pic removed]

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:26 PM
lol.. banning now...

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:26 PM
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Originally Posted by DiegoArmando (Post 898017)
****. what a waste of two hours getting to 15 posts.
So all this time you were just postslutting to get to 15?

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:27 PM
Bah. And here I was trying the subtle approach.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:29 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898019)
So all this time you were just postslutting to get to 15?
Crazy huh? I never would have thought.
Promo spammers are getting pretty smart.

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:31 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 898020)
Bah. And here I was trying the subtle approach.
I don't think he'd have stuck around to discuss his "mates band". Not after what we just did. lol...

Mojo 07-10-2010 08:35 PM
Wtf is going on in here?

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:37 PM
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Originally Posted by mojopinuk (Post 898025)
Wtf is going on in here?
You totally missed it.
The guy wrote a poem about you.

Mojo 07-10-2010 08:38 PM
Has it been edited? I don't see a poem.

Janszoon 07-10-2010 08:39 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Freebase Dali (Post 898026)
You totally missed it.
The guy wrote a poem about you.
:laughing:

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:39 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mojopinuk (Post 898027)
Has it been edited? I don't see a poem.
Yea apparently he edited it.
I went in and restored it. Have fun. It's a poem about you.

Mojo 07-10-2010 08:45 PM
That was about me? How sweet. It gives me a "misty view."

Freebase Dali 07-10-2010 08:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mojopinuk (Post 898032)
That was about me? How sweet. It gives me a "misty view."
I don't really have a good smiley for this moment.







We should tell Yac we need more smileys.

Mojo 07-10-2010 08:48 PM
Yes. We need a 'raining heart'.

Urban Hat€monger ? 07-10-2010 09:06 PM
Me

I'm f*cking amazing
I'm more amazing than you
Clearly I'm more intellectually superior to you
And more virile as well
And a real hit with the ladies
People are constantly awestruck at my amazingness
Because i'm better than any of you
And clearly modest too

Choke on that spammer boy.

Mojo 07-10-2010 09:08 PM
Is that about me?

Urban Hat€monger ? 07-10-2010 09:08 PM
Who are you again?

Mojo 07-10-2010 09:09 PM
Who are you?


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