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Rush
My first psong I write that when i play, doesn't sound so punkish, but i like it anyways. More out of old memories i guess
intro- 2x verse- pictures representing, everything un spoken dreams checked, but never chosen Time standing still, almost frozen I see your smile, brings back memories Of a time when life was great no worries but now its too late chorus- If I could go back, I wouldn't change a thing leave all the mistakes i made, which made me me Then i would stay, just to see you once more Cause I just can't wait to see you But I guess thats why they say Don't rush your life away verse- I keep thinking, of old memories You and me, how life would be World is just, under my thumb Planing to, try out my luck Saying this time, I won't let go Of a time when life was great no worries but now its too late chorus- 2x then end with verse chords- 2x |
Love your lyrics!!! They are in fact very deep and yes, it can bring back old memories to reader/listener. It's very creative and I love the chorus in which the singer/writer is in fact reminiscing. I quite enjoy it!!! Keep it up!!!
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Haha, wow. Thank you again =). you can expect more soon, I'm always knocking in my guitar and making new things whenever they hit me
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As a writer for songs, don't you ever have the wierdest inspirations at time? Anyways, asking if you can check out my song lyrics and if you want you can add some music to them, because frankly, I can only write the lyrics :) |
Wierd inspirations? you have no idea =)
And sure, send me some lyrics through pm or if you want me email, w/e works. I'll try and find recording software and see what i can do for you. Though I won't be much help over the week since I'm heading down the shore, but i can work on chords and stuff for your songs lol =) |
Confusion
Won't be on for the rest of the week since I'll be down the shore. I didn't get any writing today but decided I'll post a song I did a few months back. Oldschool but good =)
intro strum once- 16, victim of society 16, I think I'll pass on your conformity verse- Trying hard, not to lose what you own Sobriety, pretending not to get stoned Your love, something that i really want Your attitude, something that is constant Chorus- Right now I'm searching the world More to life then a chalkboard I'll be home when I find my destination For now I'm stuck with confusion verse- Believe me, when I say I'll be back Not easy, when your on the wrong track Everyday, I wake up with confusion Many days, sleeping with contradiction -Chorus- verse- Winding up, thinking about the future Sleeping it off, it's so perpendicular Fighting off, the monsters in my head Going against, things that are demanded chorus-2x then the after chorus chords :finger: |
Land of paradise
Punk song I made yesterday. Def sounds good when I play it, I need to get some recording software which I've been not trying to do lately. Anyway heres the lyrics:
Land of Paradise intro-2x verse- I opened the door to a new world, where life isn't all that bright Kicking down what stands tall, pride goes down like a waterfall My mind is eaten by termites, Theres no more wrong or right Feeling the ash land down on you, Hearing the words I loved you chorus- Now even though it doesn't feel right You'll remember me for that time..in the land of paradise verse- Forgetting the words of wisdom, welcome to the new kingdom One man seeking treasure, another man seeking his future Everything just lost hope, life standing on one thin tightrope Finally I catch my breathe, then I'm almost shot to death chorus- verse- A new world is coming shortly, that is when grief will hit me Missing what came to fast, heading in all wrong paths Tell her I miss her greatly, this new world seems lonely Trying to find retribution, keep finding my own contradiction chorus- verse chords 3x Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise |
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WOW!!! This is my favorite verse and the chorus is well-defined and I love the metaphor of a chalkboard!! Keep it up!! |
haha thank you very much
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wow good song
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Thank you
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You Know I Would
New song. First song I made that seems long and good hahah. Anyway it's called You Know I Would.
intro- 4x verse- It's been so long now, I can barely remember the time The time you told me, you needed me Like a twister, everything went outta control I lost you, I lost my soul Walking around town after all these years Seeing old places, seeing the old theater I watch as the earth grows so much stronger While I, grow so much weaker Why I left this place is far beyond me It's like waking up and forgetting the dream Chorus- If I could get it all back in one quick fast shot you know I would, you know I would If I could remember the times I spent with you, you know I would, you know I would It seems my skeletons are breaking out of the closet, and looking for the man who created all of this, all of this verse- Thinking all of these problems were so far away Whole time it was so close to me Keeping my mind set on unimportant things While all along I was breaking So many good times on 34 th street But nothing about you and me Trying to make sense of the fiction in my head Walking down the road of the abandoned Time will tell they say, But time just marks my body All these memories, just hide themselves away from me chorus-2x ending verse- I'm falling down No more ground In my own grave Much bigger then me Memories fade No one can save me and If you came back You wouldn't want me to survive this death trap |
wow that is deep, I loved it instantly, Good work!!!
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out
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I know how you feel ha and no prob!! |
Oldschool Punk song I wrote awhile ago, it's fast and sweet like punk should be. Title is medicine
Breaking things into words I'm not going to be bothered I heard my medicine arrived Shutting down for tonight Chorus- I don't need help Just a place to sleep I don't need help Just a place to eat I don't need help I just need a fix Right now, I feel so tired Why be bothered at 2pm I'm up when they stop knockin I'll be out before next month chorus- verse chords 2x end |
Very original! :) Great work!
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thank you very much haha
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song is route 66, lyrics may not make sense do to the album i want to record this with tells a story and this is a piece. But w/e. here it is:
-Intro- -verse- Jimmy where your traveling You won't find any fortune Jimmy where your going Is leading you to a end, of trust -Chorus- Catch me on route 66, lot of demons lot of pricks Catch me on route 66, lot of lies on the left side -Fill- -verse 2- When will you find the key to your inner self? Why doesn't somebody Just come to heal, your soul -Chorus- -chorus no instruments- -chorus-2x End |
-Intro- I've been, thinking it over My life, just isn't right I'm giving it, more then just words -Verse- Ditching the same old life style Walking, more then a mile Turning, back what can be turned Colors are coming back No more black and white I finally see what you were talking about -Chorus- Maybe gone but still around Just wait and see -Verse- Tempting, but never showing Glowing, even in darkneess I'm finally, getting what you said Believing all these new things Never heard but now saying Words i can't even describe -Chorus 2- Finally getting the chance to walk away from life -Solo- -Chorus 2- -Ending Verse- Why don't, we restart this No more, of this bull**** Going for what we desire most -Keep playing verse chords 2x- |
Black Diamond -Intro- -Verse- Another sunny saturday Nothing really to do Life turning into an ashtray Mind going blank -Pre Chorus- But something doesn't seem right Chorus- What's wrong, Black Diamond in the sky? False pretense is saying goodbye -Fill- -Verse- Job, turned down I was fooling around Act your age they say Why give what they want? -Pre Chorus- -Chorus 2x- -Ending Verse- Is Saying goodbye Is Saying goodbye Is saying goodbye Is saying goodbye |
Pain reliever--
-Intro- -Verse 1- Just woke up, from a dream Hey mary, how have you been Can't control, whats happening Must have been those vitamins Chorus- Whats happening in my head? Eyes painted, all in red Doctor says I should rest Take my risks before I'm dead -Verse 2- Don't need your, advice on my life Wasting time, I'm out of trying Hands shaking, but not starting Working with, what I created -Chorus 2x- -Verse 1 (palm muted)- -Chorus- :hphones: |
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