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miml 09-04-2010 10:56 AM

Song about piece
 
Hey guys, i am havin insane writers block.. and i have to make a composition for friday could anyone help me?

i wrote this ages ago and want to use it for a chorus

i'd throw you to a river
Free to flow
peace surrounding you
just like it was back home

i want the song to be about a book i read, this girl has so much attention because of her illness and its too much for her to handel it all she wants is piece

and at the end her boyfriend (can be anyone) takes her to the beach and 'smiles are throughout her face.' i dont know i just need help on verses and structure
oh and a prechorus

Dylanist 09-04-2010 11:10 AM

*peace

Alright I'm down, but you have to give me something to work with. What if the first line was something like

If all of my closests friends are here
Why don't I know anyone
In a room full of polite strangers
I just wish I could get up and run


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