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bogey_j

09-29-2010 03:47 PM

My Award-Winning Poem

I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50

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trees are trash
man is victim
temptation played the vandal

trees are trash
venus flytrap
crows call here and there

trees are trash
time fills the cup
their lies hurt my body

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what do you think :afro:

spitzaer

10-18-2010 12:10 AM

congratulatons.

someonecompletelyrandom

10-18-2010 12:46 AM

It's frustratingly short ;)

Well done.

infantrysgirl18

10-19-2010 07:11 PM

awesome. it would sound really cool with a beat behind it. what you do with the 50 bucks :P

Queen Boo

10-20-2010 01:44 PM

I'd say thats a poem worth at least $50.
go u

IamTimmeh

10-20-2010 09:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bogey_j (Post 937488)

*snap snap snap snap*

Freebase Dali

10-20-2010 11:04 PM

50 dollars was obviously the consolation prize.

Dirty

10-21-2010 01:13 AM

I'm not really into poetry, but I'm not a huge fan. Doesn't make a bit of sense to me.

But congrats on your $50!!

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