Just some poetry / lyrics i just wrote... tell me what you think?
 

her pain has nowhere to hide,
her head is screaming goodbyes,
her scars will tell a story,
death and glory,
you think its just regret,
but its not over yet,
deeper secrets,
beneath deeper scars,
my last breath is a choke,
the end is come i hope,
then my world is over one more time.