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MaximumFlow 11-15-2010 06:53 PM

V/a/n d/y/k +e

like-d.y.k.e.

Dirty 11-15-2010 06:56 PM

Terrible lyrics and no flow since you didn't record it, I can't even really imagine how that would flow to be honest with you. Just wack in general.

ravenRAWRRR 11-16-2010 10:40 AM

like i said before... dyke doesnt rhyme :(

teknoaxe 11-28-2010 05:53 PM

I heard limp bizkit in there somewhere...


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