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Old 01-21-2013, 08:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Dominik Jaworski

Hello,

This is my first post and I'm new here. I want to show you my demo.This is a song for my friend. The song isn't in perfect quality and it's not flawless but it's not what I mean. I ask for your honest feedback on the text, the music and the performance. Sorry For this "txt" file but I can't insert a link to youtube and it's in the file.
Happy listening (I hope).

Yours,
Dominik.

P.S (Sorry for my English)



Friend

All I know is so remote
Which way to be, which way to go
I’ve lost a hope that I’ll find my place and home
I’ve lost a hope…
But life goes on like a lonely song
In this crazy World I feel alone…

Now life goes on another road
In this crazy world I found someone
Who is my friend, who is my hope
And now I know I’m not alone
anywhere I go…

I have a hope, everywhere I go
I find my place , I find my home
Coz with you my friend I can’t feel low

I don’t want to know
Why you are so close
But I need to tell
That you are my hope
Everywhere I go…
You are my hope
Everywhere I go…
I find you
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