Bullet (lyrics, member, solo, guitar, Ching)

hey guys...

lyrics i just wrote... i dont really like them and i wrote them while i was really bored in maths so yeh... but anyway i just wanted to get some other opinions on em so fire away!

Bullets

When I saw that look in your eyes,
It was then that I did realise,
That the things that you said to me,
Meant nothing at all, there was nothing to see,
I remember back when we were friends,
Before you drove me round the bend,
Sometimes when I'm lonely I think of you,
If only we could start anew,

You shot me through the heart with a bullet of love,
Come on now don't go getting rough,
You wouldn't stop, couldn't get enough,
Didn't see it coming, it was off the cuff,
(Repeat)

Is it a crime just to sell my soul?
'Cos if it is, I don't wanna play that role,
Don't care what you say to me,
'Cos I know that I am free,
Get up in the morning, who's runnin' the show,
Is it Tom, **** or Harry? Oh I wanna know,
I was scared, thought i needed you,
But I'm gonna do what I wanna do

You shot me through the heart with a bullet of love,
Come on now don't go getting rough,
You wouldn't stop, couldn't get enough,
Didn't see it coming, it was off the cuff,
(Repeat)

Couldn't get away, Couldn't have my way,
No time today, No time to play,
Couldn't get away, Couldn't have my way,
No time today, No time to play,

(Guitar solo )

You shot me through the heart with a bullet of love,
Come on now don't go getting rough,
You wouldn't stop, couldn't get enough,
Didn't see it coming, it was off the cuff,
(Repeat)

fuuck. reading through that made me realise how corny it actually is... oh well i'll post it anyway even if just for your amusement.. have fun

[SEVRINLEADER]

I used to write lyrics in less then 10 minutes. And yes they were crap. But I don't like sitting thinking about lyrics and all that. If I know what I want to say I go aheah and write it down.

Lyrics are kind've cool........but they look nothing like numbers.

yeh... meh i dont even really know why i posted them... just some random sh!t that was floating round my head in maths....

[riseagainstrocks]

I'm gonna have to go with: bad. the chorus I mean dude c'mon. seems you realize that they aren't good. well at least you know.

[blackTshirt]

sorry pal... but i like the "no time to play" part
re-write it and take the cliches out and then "start anew"
hehe good luck with it

yeh they suck i must have been listening to maroon 5 or something when i wrote them... not that i listen to maroon 5

[blackTshirt]

hahaha.. were you watching "titanic"?
not that i have.. you know

yeh i musta bin doin something stupid like that

[blackTshirt]

brushing your teeth? haha

yeh.... pretty much...