Walking On Water

ivorybenz · 07-23-2012, 04:37 PM

feedback please...

Walking On Water

It’s like I got super-powers
Everything I do, devours
The evil is to be scoured
As I look up into the skies
And hear nothing but cries
Everything in gravity I defy

I’m walking on water
Kingpin of sorcery
Dropping my magic
On this final task
Cause I’m walking on water

More superior then others
Healing one whom suffers
My eye’s are on another
So listen to what I gotta say
I’m god-like by end of the day
Pain suffers on the fray

I’m walking on water
Kingpin of sorcery
Dropping my magic
On this final task
Cause I’m walking on water

Bursting out of the paradox
My mind can’t be unlocked
Giving people they’re shocks
While I smirk and is delighted
Dictated events while I was invited
As everything was recited

As I’m walking on water
Kingpin of sorcery
Dropping my magic
On this final task
Cause I’m walking on water

UndercoverApple · 07-24-2012, 07:47 PM

You've got some really interesting imagery! Have you thought about what kind of music would go along with it or is this strictly word

?

ivorybenz · 07-24-2012, 11:53 PM

I havent really thought. I would like to get all my material recorded one day though.

07-23-2012, 04:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
ivorybenz Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 6	Walking On Water feedback please... Walking On Water It’s like I got super-powers Everything I do, devours The evil is to be scoured As I look up into the skies And hear nothing but cries Everything in gravity I defy I’m walking on water Kingpin of sorcery Dropping my magic On this final task Cause I’m walking on water More superior then others Healing one whom suffers My eye’s are on another So listen to what I gotta say I’m god-like by end of the day Pain suffers on the fray I’m walking on water Kingpin of sorcery Dropping my magic On this final task Cause I’m walking on water Bursting out of the paradox My mind can’t be unlocked Giving people they’re shocks While I smirk and is delighted Dictated events while I was invited As everything was recited As I’m walking on water Kingpin of sorcery Dropping my magic On this final task Cause I’m walking on water

07-24-2012, 07:47 PM	#2 (permalink)
UndercoverApple Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: California Posts: 10	You've got some really interesting imagery! Have you thought about what kind of music would go along with it or is this strictly word ?

07-24-2012, 11:53 PM	#3 (permalink)
ivorybenz Groupie Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 6	I havent really thought. I would like to get all my material recorded one day though.