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Old 05-23-2005, 02:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Question bitta help here?

Hey! I'm writing this song for my school production and I'm stuck on lyrics. It's a comedy, so they don't have to deep or meaningful or anything. Basically, I need at least 3 verses. The song is about this guy Melvit, he's a fashion designer. He makes suits out of spoons and forks. He's one of those narrow minded people that once he had one idea (suits of spoons and forks) he can't let it go. There are other charactors that should be included in the song: Matt (a kid, about 12 or so), Cook (Drunk, in love with a mannaquin), Ditzy (exactly like her name, likes clothes), and 6 assistants (blonde, obbsess with sizes and weights, possibly annorexic). This is pretty much the structure I need(unless you people have ideas):
verse 1: Intro, about his life before, his motovation for a design
v 2: I already have this one, though I may add more. It goes like this:
I thought of spoons and forks
And their simple elegance
Why not make them into shirts
and maybe even pants
v 3: Needs to finish with him unvealing his creation, and putting them on his subjects (Matt, Cook and Ditzy). How perfect it is, how just cloth is inferior and all that
I also thought, since Ditzy likes fashion, she could but in occaissonally with stuff like: What about in blue?
chorus: I'm not really sure, but I thought something like:
thinking of dinner
but not of the food
just forks for the main course
and spoons for dessert

thats pretty much all i have. I don't have any music. If you could suggest any. It can't be slow or anything, it's a happy song, fast too.
Thanx
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Old 05-29-2005, 11:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Sounds like you have a good start going to me. Keep trying, you'll be able to do it on your own. You don't need our help .
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Old 05-29-2005, 04:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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woh, that's a crazy school production you got there, then again they always are a bit...
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