Acoustic Song Making :)

[diemcee]

Hey everyone, pretty new on here. Been writing a lot more acoustic songs lately. recording on garage band on my phone. let me know what you think

This is for you Jesse Lacey

Lyrics:
Well let me think of this
I got these notes just flowin off my finger tips
And once its gone
The melody carries on
And I'm tryin to stray away
From the notes that I hit yesterday
I glance in the mirror and see only me
And whats ahead of us
Is something I cant even trust
It's a scary thing to think
But all I see in my dreams is something that is beyond captivating
We float away
And make our escape
But we fall
With intent to break.




Conceptual

Lyrics:
Have you noticed that we are spinning different notes?
We're linked to a world that we will never know
and I convey that we'll realize and wake up from this age
oooh
break free from greed
let go of necessity
learn to live with what you hold
you have these hands
so never let it go
conceptual i find you
conceptual i feel you



Hot Air Balloon Ride

Lyrics:
If you were to see
whats left of me - youd laugh
once so prideful
just to be let down by the past
and i'm walking a line
of whats wrong and right
whats left to decide
well i'll make my own path
Lets go
to space and have a smoke
i will take you there
i will take you there
so follow me
as i exhale gracefully
we are leaving now
can you see the ground?
with weightlessness
we can do what we want
so float over here
get close enough to bond
like two atoms in this universe
we're so small and condensed
we're all alone now
you're all that makes sense
so scream out loud
and let everything come out
we have made it here
there is nothing to fear
but we are losing height
on our hot air balloon ride.

[diemcee]

These are the first 3 of 7 that i've written. Any tips on which direction to go?

[Scarlett O'Hara]

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