New lyrics about abusive relationship, opinions please?
 

It started so quickly
They didn't understand
What you see
When you see him
There were warnings
But baby love is blind
By the time it sank in you
Were already trying to hide

Sorry doesn't make it ok
And "I love you" is said too late

It probably isn't right
It probably isn't good
The future looked so bright
While you ignored what you could
Open up the windows
Shut all the blinds
The light comes pouring in
But no one else can see inside
Cover it all up with a smile
It seems so perfect
From the outside

He says I love you
And buys another gift
It doesn't change
The fact that you've been hit
Old scars are hidden
But memories remain
He's the reason
That you'll never be the same

Makeup is your only friend
It won't be long till you need it again

It probably isn't right
It probably isn't good
The future looked so bright
While you ignored what you could
Open up the windows
Shut all the blinds
The light comes pouring in
But no one else can see inside
Cover it all up with a smile
It seems so perfect
From the outside

You have two choices now
You can walk away
Or you can stay and
Let the grave be your escape

It probably isn't right
It probably isn't good
The future looked so bright
While you ignored what you could
Open up the windows
Shut all the blinds
The light comes pouring in
But no one else can see inside
Cover it all up with a smile
It seems so perfect
From the outside



Any advice?

Nice, i like it. What kind of track would the lyrics go with though? like what did you make it for? rap? pop? rnb? or just simple Poetry?

I made a video singing it, I want to eventually put music to it... Since I don't play any instruments, that might take a while lol
Here's the YouTube link, kinda scary looking, but at least you can hear the general idea of how it goes

link me, i'll check it out.

Amazing lyrics man ! seriously

COOL, I Felt it dude!!!