its all up to you.....

[miinah-a-pun]

starting our day with a fight
we ended up laying on the doorstep
you smoke and get drunk
you ask for more than what you want
but remember things cant always go right
its where you and i live.....

you can light a candle and pray
or you can just set a fire, dare to burn yourself
you can take a step ahead
or you can just fall from your own place
its all up to you.....

i forgot your name
and i can barely remember your voice
so let me see if one day you stop blaming me
let me see if one day u miss me
along with my memories will u cry?

i can still see my old "YOU"
and its all up to you
you can light a candle and pray
or you can just set a fire, dare to burn yourself
you can take a step ahead
or you can just fall from your own place......

[TheNiceGuy]

This is vicious! I like the overall tone here, and in particular this line "you can light a candle and pray
or you can just set a fire and dare to burn yourself" The second part of this line really turns the almost forgiving first part on it's head. This stuff is great keep it up!

[miinah-a-pun]

thanks a lot for compliment

[miinah-a-pun]