Got Little Snippets. Need Advice. (lyrics, rock, member, songs)

BreakOut · 06-18-2005, 04:20 PM

It's just songs
from a movie
replayin' in my
head.

Instead of playin',
then stoppin',
it's going over & over
again.
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(that was one snippet.)
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It's cotton candy rock & rock
It's cotton candy mind control
It's cotton candy in our soul
And we don't care!
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(And that was the other)
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I'm trying to really decide if I want to combine the two into one song, or if I want to work them as separate. I've had a bit of experience with poetry, but not real much with lyrics.

Mind giving me advice?

06-18-2005, 04:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
BreakOut Groupie Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 11	Got Little Snippets. Need Advice. It's just songs from a movie replayin' in my head. Instead of playin', then stoppin', it's going over & over again. -------- (that was one snippet.) -------- It's cotton candy rock & rock It's cotton candy mind control It's cotton candy in our soul And we don't care! -------- (And that was the other) -------- I'm trying to really decide if I want to combine the two into one song, or if I want to work them as separate. I've had a bit of experience with poetry, but not real much with lyrics. Mind giving me advice?